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Frank E Gibbard
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Frank E Gibbard

In the attic of memory

lie fusty objects of my

heart; I browse among

the recollections of my

times' past, an antique

collection of no earthly

value yet inestimable

to me and made to last.

 

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PAST

In the attic of memory

lie fusty objects of my

heart; I browse among

the recollections of my

times' past, an antique

collection of no costly

value yet to me unique

enduring, made to last.

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Like the sense of a room within to spend time with those we value.

 

Simply, quietly expressed Frank. Self-contained, but one to relate to as well.

 

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Head (memory) and heart. Nice dichotomy. Like Tink's comment, "It reads right."

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