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Salt

 

Take me through the blue

And let me dance and dance and dance with you

I get lost in your eyes when you’re near me

You make my heart sweet and soft and free

 

You are love incarnate

And I can’t wait to hold you in my arms again

To feel the warmth of your life against

The heat of mine

 

Exquisite

Tender

Strong and bold

Your voice rings through my soul

And makes it whole

 

What would life be without you?

 

I’d feel like the ocean floor without

Salt water…

To receive love, you have to give it...

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Like the Go Boy poem, this has a lyric quality. Can't recall the last time I saw the word incarnate in a poem. :)

 

Ending is great.

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