douglas Posted February 28, 2013 Share Posted February 28, 2013 Salt Take me through the blue And let me dance and dance and dance with you I get lost in your eyes when you’re near me You make my heart sweet and soft and free You are love incarnate And I can’t wait to hold you in my arms again To feel the warmth of your life against The heat of mine Exquisite Tender Strong and bold Your voice rings through my soul And makes it whole What would life be without you? I’d feel like the ocean floor without Salt water… Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted February 28, 2013 Share Posted February 28, 2013 Like the Go Boy poem, this has a lyric quality. Can't recall the last time I saw the word incarnate in a poem. :) Ending is great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted March 13, 2013 Share Posted March 13, 2013 I liked "the warmth of your life" and "the heat of mine." And I agree with Marti. This is lovely-lyrical. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
douglas Posted April 15, 2013 Author Share Posted April 15, 2013 Glad you enjoyed the poem guys! Thanks. Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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