fdelano Posted March 26, 2013 Share Posted March 26, 2013 Air Watch With envy, and feet trapped in sand, I follow the flight of graceful gulls, with bent gray wings and seeking beaks, who rise and sink in the stream of air above the salty chop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted March 26, 2013 Share Posted March 26, 2013 The first two lines set the tone perfectly for this short piece and I feel the narrators longing to be up there with those "bent grey wings and seeking beaks". Enjoyed G. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted March 27, 2013 Author Share Posted March 27, 2013 Thanks, my friend. I doubt I could even get both feet off the sand at the same time. I think I'll just watch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Wow, I love, love this. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted April 3, 2013 Author Share Posted April 3, 2013 Gracias, mi Amiga. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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