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Air Watch


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Air Watch

 

 

With envy,

and feet trapped in sand,

I follow the flight

of graceful gulls,

with bent gray wings

and seeking beaks,

who rise and sink

in the stream of air

above the salty chop.

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The first two lines set the tone perfectly for this short piece and I feel the narrators longing to be up there with those "bent grey wings and seeking beaks". Enjoyed G.

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Thanks, my friend. I doubt I could even get both feet off the sand at the same time. I think I'll just watch. :rolleyes:

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Gracias, mi Amiga.

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