Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted March 29, 2013 Share Posted March 29, 2013 Music Soul, Rambling Man Music Soul, Rambling Man I want to sing you my song if I can So please listen to the words I sing to you freely from the bottom of my heart It doesn't get better than this so a long time from now I will still be singing you my love song from the bottom of my heart And it doesn't get any better than me telling you in words I wrote from the bottom of my heart freely expressing that I will always love you. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted March 29, 2013 Share Posted March 29, 2013 Almost more lyrical than versical -- if that's even a word. :) Free, flowing, and obviously heart-felt. But I think: so along time from now Should be: so a long time from now I heard the group Extreme's melody from "More Than Words" in a few places. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted March 30, 2013 Author Share Posted March 30, 2013 tthanks marti for reading me and commenting. always appreciate your remarks for they are always insightdful. you picked on a typo as to how my mind reads it what i wrote and how my euyesight perceives ehat i wrote. i corrected the typo. funny i read it the way you put it should be. thanks. victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Nice Victor, I love the pattern you set in the rhythm of this piece. It sings. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
douglas Posted April 6, 2013 Share Posted April 6, 2013 what a lovely piece! Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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