Music Soul, Rambling Man

[Larsen M. Callirhoe]

Music Soul, Rambling Man

 

Music Soul, Rambling Man

I want to sing you my song

if I can

 

So please listen

to the words

I sing to you

freely

from the bottom of my heart

 

It doesn't get better than this

so a long time from now

I will still

be singing you my love song

from the bottom of my heart

 

And it doesn't get any better

than me telling you in words

I wrote

from the bottom of my heart

freely expressing

that I will always love you.

[dcmarti1]

Almost more lyrical than versical -- if that's even a word. :)

 

Free, flowing, and obviously heart-felt.

 

But I think:

 

so along time from now

 

Should be:

 

so a long time from now

 

I heard the group Extreme's melody from "More Than Words" in a few places.

[Larsen M. Callirhoe]

tthanks marti for reading me and commenting. always appreciate your remarks for they are always insightdful. you picked on a typo as to how my mind reads it what i wrote and how my euyesight perceives ehat i wrote. i corrected the typo. funny i read it the way you put it should be. thanks.

 

victor

[Tinker]

Nice Victor, I love the pattern you set in the rhythm of this piece. It sings.

 

~~Tink

[douglas]

what a lovely piece!