dr_con Posted April 24, 2013 Share Posted April 24, 2013 Off Course Been distracted as of late O understood the best way to steal someone’s thinking is to tell them a secret Butterflies medicate when sick Can tell when a woman is interested Ran until collapse in gentle crib of Rag and Milk weed The honey bees settled with a golden hum sunlight thick as honey and everything suspended in its place They tickled This memory shared where did it get left In the Summer heat between Now and Then We needed orientation. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted April 24, 2013 Share Posted April 24, 2013 Truly good mood piece. Especially like second stanza--so insightful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 24, 2013 Author Share Posted April 24, 2013 Thanks!I edited the last line. ;-) Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted April 24, 2013 Share Posted April 24, 2013 sunlight thick as honey and everything suspended in its place Now THAT is imagery! Visual & tactile! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 24, 2013 Author Share Posted April 24, 2013 Thank You Doc! Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted April 24, 2013 Share Posted April 24, 2013 HI DC, Love this, you grabbed with the first stanza, what secret, what secret? Then the rich imagery that follows, nice! ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 24, 2013 Author Share Posted April 24, 2013 Thanks Judi! Glad you liked! Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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