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Off Course

 

Been distracted

as of late

O understood

the best way

to steal someone’s

thinking is to tell them

a secret

 

Butterflies medicate

when sick

Can tell when

a woman is interested

 

Ran until collapse

in gentle

crib of Rag and Milk

weed

 

The honey bees

settled with a golden hum

 

sunlight thick as honey

and everything suspended

in its place

 

They tickled

 

This memory shared

where did it get left

 

In the Summer heat

between Now and Then

 

 

We needed orientation.

thegateless.org Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Or if your bored, head to the Zazzle store: https://www.zazzle.com/store/gateless. If you buy anything I lose a bet, so consider that before you violate the digital rules.

 

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Truly good mood piece. Especially like second stanza--so insightful.

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sunlight thick as honey

and everything suspended

in its place

 

Now THAT is imagery! Visual & tactile!

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Thanks Judi! Glad you liked!

 

 

Juris

thegateless.org Come on over and check out my poetry substack y'all;-) Or if your bored, head to the Zazzle store: https://www.zazzle.com/store/gateless. If you buy anything I lose a bet, so consider that before you violate the digital rules.

 

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