Benjamin Posted April 26, 2013 Share Posted April 26, 2013 a metronomic rain of wake-fed conversation guinness and port wine filigrees and spanish lace cold winter faces of white handkerchiefs that cede to a reluctant spring a gurgling of hopper-heads and waterspouts a burst of streams of mallard ducks and busy birds and fresh green weeping willows of cherry blossom and laburnum daffodils and hyacinths a melange of colour warmth and light and with the sun the smile of an old friend Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted April 26, 2013 Share Posted April 26, 2013 As vivid as an imagist painting. Stark contrast between the 'Wake Fed' conversation and the bursting forth of life- and yet- life in death -death in life and the enigmatic father's wish to mourn embrace or accept the world of thesun as it is. Enjoyed! DC&J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted April 26, 2013 Share Posted April 26, 2013 A rhythm flows gently through the contrasting images here, like a return of a hymn's chorus and the change of mood and senses. Wakes were traditional during my young years. When my g'pa died, all of his cronies came with their chairs. They talked and smoked all night, the draped casket with a block of ice underneath, a young boy sitting on the floor in an opposite corner, silent, but listening. The next day was a Christmas that never came. "a metronomic rain of wake-fed conversation" is a poem complete. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted April 26, 2013 Share Posted April 26, 2013 The kind of poem that the writer probably enjoyed writing - the reader certainly enjoyed reading. Agree with the comment on the opening lines. badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted April 27, 2013 Share Posted April 27, 2013 guinness and port wine When can I take the UK citizenship test? Agree with dr_con: great imagery. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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