Bloodyday Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 I drank last cup of sorrow tasted sour in full of bowl Some tears leaving me behind like abandon kingdom to fall Breezes vibrates my heart like the lea bows in curve I walk against the time to trick the end for love If I could control my feelings spending time to snooze for your dreams how they look to shine your sky with blues My missing sunshine bestowed the oath to my crooked life is dimmed. Perhaps living in normal sense is erased by the fate screamed What should i say: still alive or not, I don't know about my life Living like a corpse is the only meaning or mocking the death with a knife! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldenlangur Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Hello Bloodyday, To be driven to this brink as you show in your poem is the other face of love. These lines are truly poignant: Bloodyday wrote: ... I walk against the time to trick the end for love .... Perhaps living in normal sense is erased by the fate ... Reminds me of the songs of love penned by the Indian poet and film director Gulzhar - always a sense of loss and longing he evokes in his lyrics. goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Some tears leaving me behind like abandon kingdom to fall what a wonderful expression Bloodyday. Very hurtful poem. The sadness is expressed on wonderful way, and very poetical. Poem full with good expressions and imageries. I love how sounds the ending part. It hits: What should i say: still alive or not, I don't know about my life Living like a corpse is the only meaning or mocking the death with a knife! Thanks for sharing Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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