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One Chance


Larsen M. Callirhoe
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Larsen M. Callirhoe

One Chance

 

 

one life, one love...

i want to hold you in my arms

and feel your breasts against my chest.

 

when i look into your eyes

i see the world and the stars

in the horizon up above.

 

one step, one dance...

i want to love you forever.

and hold you in my arms

and spin you all around.

 

one chance, one spark...

i want to hold you close to my heart.

 

one day, one night...

we share our lifes together.

 

we walk along the shore

listening to the waves crash

one by one

our hearts beat to this rhythm.

 

a fire, one truth...

a spark that keeps are romance alive.

 

one desire, one hope...

i want to marry you

and sing you a love song.

 

i hope you accept me

as your lover.

 

i want to live with you forever.

i take your hand

and show you where the angels do live.

 

you are more beautiful then them

Elizabeth so please marry me.

i will give you my world

and show you what my soul is like,

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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Aleksandra

Romantic and lovely. You expressed good romance and feelings Victor.

Good ending my friend. The most what we can give to beloved - is our souls, there is the biggest truth and the power of love.

 

Nice poem and good for read.

 

Much enjoyed Vic

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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I like the openness in this poem and, generally, in your style. These parts have a directness which appeals to this reader:

i want to marry you

and sing you a love song.

 

i hope you accept me

as your lover.

 

i want to live with you forever.

i take your hand

 

you are more beautiful then them

Elizabeth so please marry me ....

Your poetic voice is strong, Victor.

 

Tony

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