Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 One Chance one life, one love... i want to hold you in my arms and feel your breasts against my chest. when i look into your eyes i see the world and the stars in the horizon up above. one step, one dance... i want to love you forever. and hold you in my arms and spin you all around. one chance, one spark... i want to hold you close to my heart. one day, one night... we share our lifes together. we walk along the shore listening to the waves crash one by one our hearts beat to this rhythm. a fire, one truth... a spark that keeps are romance alive. one desire, one hope... i want to marry you and sing you a love song. i hope you accept me as your lover. i want to live with you forever. i take your hand and show you where the angels do live. you are more beautiful then them Elizabeth so please marry me. i will give you my world and show you what my soul is like, Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 Romantic and lovely. You expressed good romance and feelings Victor. Good ending my friend. The most what we can give to beloved - is our souls, there is the biggest truth and the power of love. Nice poem and good for read. Much enjoyed Vic Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 I like the openness in this poem and, generally, in your style. These parts have a directness which appeals to this reader: i want to marry you and sing you a love song. i hope you accept me as your lover. i want to live with you forever. i take your hand you are more beautiful then them Elizabeth so please marry me .... Your poetic voice is strong, Victor. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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