douglas Posted June 19, 2013 Share Posted June 19, 2013 The Ghost of Youi woke up this morning with liquid diamonds in the corners of my eyes i woke up feeling fading touches from your invisible hands and as i sat within the enveloping folds of the crisp whiteness of what was our sanctuary i swear i could detect a whiff of your eau de toilette intermingling with the morning breeze a sharp and sudden pain exploded within me causing my heart to constrict scarlet agony had you been visiting me my love and why had you not been able to materialise? this morning i felt so alone in our bed sitting for hours like a frozen statue of ice slowly melting this morning i missed you so much my love who has left Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted June 20, 2013 Share Posted June 20, 2013 Poignant and true. One of your best.j uris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted June 21, 2013 Share Posted June 21, 2013 scarlet agony Parts of yours always JUMP out at me. This was the one. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dansalinger Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 powerful Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonqueen Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 Horrifyingly relatable, for me. A realization of a pain that comes ramming through the walls, even years and innumerable events later. So well written, douglas. Have read several times and it seems to become more real with each. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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