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līkumi, piemēram, zāli

(Bends Like Grass)

 

My entire life I've been

Blessed/Cursed

 

My mother exclaimed

(when I was little)

‘You bend like Grass’

 

I’m a doorkeeper for an old dog

(during summer)

Outside/Inside

 

I have trouble with these tools

Faith/Belief

 

Going this way

and then that

Politics/Religion/Science

 

And everything chatters

Right/Wrong

 

And who are you with that certainty?

You believed in my potential

despotic in need

leaving a legacy

that is just so

 

I love it all

Sting & Honey

 

Reminded on the lake

while you swam

I saw us both

in your angles

 

Mother/Father

 

Posted

Unity and fluidity, I like the humour threaded in

 

 

I have trouble with these tools

Faith/Belief

 

 

Also that intrusive chatter...is familiar :smile:

 

badge

Posted

Very very interesting; sensitive, aggressive ( a little!) but overall quite vulnerable.

Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim

Posted

A most human piece:

"I love it all

Sting & Honey" B.

Posted

Thanks all. Yes aggressive and human indeed! ;-) appreciate the feedback...

Posted

Doc Juris, thank you for this verbal gift. I will keep it in a safe place.

Posted

For all that I feel and seem the same, I have changed, though steadfast in my basic ideals. I too, am sentry for an older dog.

 

Doc, as usual with your work, I must read it many times prior to commenting. I have to say I love this one, I experience the vacillation in many things, but always come home to myself.

 

Much enjoyed.

 

mq

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Posted

MQ & Franklin. Touched by your responses. Thank you soo much! ;-)

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