dedalus Posted July 8, 2013 Share Posted July 8, 2013 a preponderance of prehensile pubescents ascend a stiletto staircase adrift among heroes in this lucky plucky land escalating all arising in sullen syncopation lost among the clouds Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 8, 2013 Share Posted July 8, 2013 A brief poem for you Bren! But exquisite none the less. Loveded a perfect image, all the implied contradiction have me smiling. Well done! Con/Jur/D Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 LOL Brendan, This just sounds fun, an unusual style from you but I'm glad you played with it. I love the musical tones that eminate from the words and still paint a lovely image. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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