dr_con Posted July 8, 2013 Share Posted July 8, 2013 You Never Know I’ll find you wherever you are There’s a bountiful harvest of beauty and pain You act like you don’t know me (running scared) But you owe me not like the false promises and subsequent debt of Church State and Family But the Birthright the initial bargain And you can’t hide Not in the country among the trees ( I’ll come as a bird or a cricket) Or a poem (Kyoto Lazarus) or a Garden (flower vegetable weed) Mansion (divorce rebellious or gifted child) Slum (the kindness of bullies) Media (a child begs for more rice) Or anywhere else on this or any other And I’m not Death (although that’s part of it) I’m You knocking (No matter how squalorous or ornate your hexed doors of protection) Its better to invite me in This kicking and screaming pretending you don’t know (although that’s part of it) doesn’t suit us (but you never know) Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted July 9, 2013 Share Posted July 9, 2013 Fascinating and well presented as usual: the truth will out they say:-) and it leaves me thinking of playing chess with ones conscience whilst waiting for a mortgaged soul to be foreclosed. Lol. Ben Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jainrohit Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 The poem has a raw power in it . The breakup of thoughts in small and large lines gives a consistent shake to the reader and prevents it from being rather ' common '...... The tone of this poem is a wonderful achievement ..... I especially loved how the subject and the ideas move back and forth Enjoyed Mr. benjamin ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 14, 2013 Author Share Posted July 14, 2013 Thank you Ben & Jain. As always, deeply appreciate your willingness to engage in my musings;-) Con/Jur/D Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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