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Riverine


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This is a revived work from some years ago, one of my first attempts and one of only a few with any rhyming scheme:

 

Riverine

 

With nodding clouds in rolling cover

over Daughter of the Stars,

I wend my way along the flow

and drink the wonder of her.

 

With misty fingers on my brow

and dewy boughs bent near me,

I breathe the heady draft of life

and wonder that I'm here now.

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I like it. Flows well, reflects the riverine idea -- Fine writing...

 

Juris

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Thank you, Doc. An elevated word from you is like a drop of honey without the bees.

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"I breathe the heady draft of life
and wonder that I'm here now."

 

All in all a positive well formed piece that flows with an appreciation of being alive. G.

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