fdelano Posted July 9, 2013 Share Posted July 9, 2013 This is a revived work from some years ago, one of my first attempts and one of only a few with any rhyming scheme: Riverine With nodding clouds in rolling cover over Daughter of the Stars, I wend my way along the flow and drink the wonder of her. With misty fingers on my brow and dewy boughs bent near me, I breathe the heady draft of life and wonder that I'm here now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 9, 2013 Share Posted July 9, 2013 I like it. Flows well, reflects the riverine idea -- Fine writing... Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted July 10, 2013 Author Share Posted July 10, 2013 Thank you, Doc. An elevated word from you is like a drop of honey without the bees. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 "I breathe the heady draft of lifeand wonder that I'm here now." All in all a positive well formed piece that flows with an appreciation of being alive. G. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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