Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 16, 2009 Share Posted May 16, 2009 in the kitchen we dream, we laugh yes we even cry, my soul is immortal my spirit takes flight as the wings of my heart expand. i take flight to different worlds as my mind expands. taking drugs and getting high seems to be all i do we live, we touch, when we make love the night time turns to eternal bliss. we dream, we dance we sing to the nightime stars that twinkle on us. we walk on the clouds as we hold each others hands close to one another's hearts. when we make love the birds sing to us as the sun rises starting another day. we breath, we exhale we all mediatate to the same gods. i worship the goddess as the clouds pass over head just like each passing thought that is in our heads. we get stoned, we get drunk, all we do is wanna get high and have a good time. i am sad, i cry all the time. my heart is broken like the stained=glass window that shows christ's crusifixtion. i walk, i whisper, softly into your ears as tears fall down my face and falls on your hair into your ears as we embrace. touching souls as we hug we dance on the clouds. there is a rainbow overhead it is the holy spirit shining her light on us. again we laugh, we smile, yes we even cry to the tune that is playing on the radio. it reminds me of the first time we met. my heart soared thru the air then. in the kitchen i prepare a meal only for you. we share a candlelight dinner. as the sun goes down and sets the day you take off your clothes only wanting to make love to me. i think of these things tormenting memories as i sip wine in the kitchen as tears fall from my face. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 This entire poem is very lyrical, Victor. I especially like it here: my spirit takes flight as the wings of my heart expand. i take flight to different worlds as my mind expands. taking drugs and getting high seems to be all i do ... and here: we get stoned, we get drunk, all we do is wanna get high and have a good time. i am sad, i cry all the time. my heart is broken like the stained-glass window that shows christ's crusifixtion .... As always, I enjoyed the genuineness of thought and feeling, and how you blend the mundane and ethereal. The title grounds the poem in reality. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 The persona aches and his religiousness does not seem to offer comfort in his loss. It is raw outburst of loneliness, Larsen. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleksandra Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 Vic I agree with Tony this poem is lyrical. I love these parts and expressions and also they give wonderful imageries: my soul is immortal my spirit takes flight as the wings of my heart expand. and here i am sad, i cry all the time. my heart is broken like the stained-glass window good written and very emotional, deep with feelings. Well done my friend Alek Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted May 17, 2009 Author Share Posted May 17, 2009 JoelJosol wrote: The persona aches and his religiousness does not seem to offer comfort in his loss. It is raw outburst of loneliness, Larsen. hi joel, you said exactly what i was trying to insinuate in my poem. very good reading by you my friend, aleks tony thanks for commenting. much appreciated. thanks both for saying this is lyrical. i wasn'y even paying attention to that aspect of the poem lol. i was just expressing my feelings and sentiments that joel touched base with real well. thanks for commenting you all. victor aka larsen Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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