jainrohit Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 With all our might , why do we fight , is there any reason ?Houses burning , Spouses burning , each house turned GarrisonFelt exciting , we kept fighting , with utmost precision All it will mar , this bloody war , imposed act of treason Some will savage , Some will ravage , to heal their suffered painShoot who escape , someone will rape ,to lessen their mind's strainAttitudes change, toward's revenge , sufferer's mind will stainNo sanctity , No purity , Life's value will disdain Governance's fault , Youth'll revolt , will resort to weapon snatched with all might , what was our right,with force back be takenWhich is a must- That pious trust , Permanently shakenBy god's own will , Shades of devil , In their minds awakenRehabilitate- Rejuvenate- but this act of traversal Despite good will - won't ever heal - not capable of reversal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 Raw, almost visceral. Perhaps that's why I like it. "Governance's fault." Exactly. What if "we the people" could make peace break out? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 A suitable reflection on the horrors of war. Quick raw and truthful. Con/Jur/D Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted July 23, 2013 Share Posted July 23, 2013 A slice of stark reality that makes one wonder, we never seem to learn that.. "like begets like". Benjamin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatekeeper Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 I suspect you are right - no reversal. It mostly boils down to greed, I suspect. Instinctually human, I am afraid. A bit of a tour-de-force, this. Quote from the black desert Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted August 24, 2013 Share Posted August 24, 2013 Hi, I think you captured exactly what the title implies. And let me approach this from a little different angle than the rest, I thought the frame of this piece fit the content beautifully. It was orderly, sharp, concise, very military. Loved it.~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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