Benjamin Posted August 26, 2013 Share Posted August 26, 2013 carom of comet and volcano-- incubus and succubus let loose-- three hundred million years to compress coal and jet-- from miners lamp to surgical glove and air-conditioned space in a blink Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted August 26, 2013 Share Posted August 26, 2013 Starting with "carom"? Brilliant. Great word. Video works well with poem. And I noticed --taking a guess at first-- the syllabic structure. Yes, 300 million versus our puny years of "civilization". Nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted August 26, 2013 Share Posted August 26, 2013 Wonderful reflective piece (I must confess I needed to look up carom and that gives me a thrill! ;-) Very entertaining. Enjoyed immensely! Thanks, Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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