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life won't return for second time

keep rocking! this is the gesture

we won't spend

sing our song like cheerful band.

 

last night an angel came in my dream

took all the tears and gave a kiss

this morning i've got a mail

some words drive me away to sail.

 

screaming the world with the wildest melody

this is the time i cherish for

to enjoy my every moment

to rule the world erasing my every lament!

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

poetry in motion. i love the aliteration you used in your poem. it made this an excelent read.

 

victor

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Yes, Bloodyday, life is short, and it won't return for second time. But the light has returned for you, and "this morning" you've "got a mail."

 

The end is triumphant:

screaming the world with the wildest melody

this is the time i cherish for

to enjoy my every moment

to rule the world erasing my every lament!

This reads like a tribute to perseverance.

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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Aleksandra

Bloodyday hi and nice to see you around.

You shared very beautiful poem. You made a good write in this poem bc you are starting this one with a voice of wiser, then you are going detailed with speaking about a dream, with a personal view of the life, so on the end to finish with very powerful poetical expressions, strong and so positive.

 

Much enjoyed

 

Aleksandra

The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau

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goldenlangur

Hi Bloodyday,

 

Such passion and anguish in your poem! This stanza encapsulates this movingly:

 

 

screaming the world with the wildest melody

this is the time i cherish for

to enjoy my every moment

to rule the world erasing my every lament!

Particularly love screaming the world with the wildest melody and also, erasing my every lament

 

 

goldenlangur

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goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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What should i say, life has possibilities in manifold vibration. That's why some relations present a flow of sinusoidal wave like the upper stream shows happiness and the lower shows the melancholy!

 

Even if i want to see in different perspective, i lost myself all on a sudden realizing what i've lost. life is no longer simple or what so ever for me, but i know i need to go on like others did!

 

 

Is this the time to live on with smile or scream in silence?

 

an ocean of sorrow is groaning everytime when i try to smile!

 

 

Forget it! let's live our life!

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