with the continuation of 'worhtless expression'

[Bloodyday]

An ocean flows so versatile

with a breeze to embrace

keeping all the tears, sorrows

my heart becomes so dense.

 

while try to smile loud

old memories pull my notions

reminds me what I’ve lost

feeling the force of vibrations.

 

but I need to go on

what others did in past

new world to embrace everywhere

a new role to cast!

 

till then I’ll live alone

craving my scream in silence

letting my happiness theft away

Like the kingdom without fence!

[Larsen M. Callirhoe]

hi bloodyday,

 

excellent poem my friend. the metphors work well. the poem flows with some very original imagery.

 

larsen aka victor

[Bloodyday]

Dear Aka

 

 

yesterday was not a day to enjoy

my happiness blooms with another decoy

 

Thanks!

[tonyv]

A curious blend of hopefulness and despair -- the poem comes equipped with fresh expressions throughout. I especially like my heart becomes so dense, feeling the force of vibrations, and the kingdom without fence. These lines take me to another dimension, somewhere between the beach and the stars. I like this sequel.

 

Tony

[Bloodyday]

hi Tony

 

 

some fallen hearts may realize the pains how it become the source of their poems. tears may cover the eyesight but can't drown old memories.

 

sometimes tears get dry. then you look at the sky with zero emotion just living like a dead!

 

 

thanks for your comment!