dr_con Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Carrying the Goat Head (NYE 2014) At the party last night few ate the Black Eyed Peas Collard Greens and Aduki in aged Miso Sauce just to be sure When does the New Year Begin? On December seventeenth when I celebrated nineteen years of working with working for working the Orisha Omolu On Solstice when curious parts of the past collided with ever uncertain futures meanings created by viral narratives infesting hosted nows On the tick of a clock lubricated with champagne and wet or dry platonic kisses On the steam rising from Mount Ijen as the white masked Indonesian men in hard hats bury a goat’s head offering to the Volcano a traditional to the afore mentioned uncertainty to be more blessed than blighted The Vast Abstracted Eye Chorus rumbles: Seeing just the digital shallows of a soul deep photograph replicating from the Ulet Ifansasti/Getty Syndicate: How Quaint! How Primitive! Look at this in our Modern Age! Do they not know that Time has been conquered and boxed by instruments most occidental and divine What infernal sulfurous heathens these are! These sacrifices do not provide the macronutrients needed to build efficient machines don’t they understand meat rendered by blades stainless and hygienic with chemicals cleaning the mud gunking up works produces brains clean and most prudent A mountain is simply a poor design that impedes gainful development unless upgraded by ski lift and lodges it remains only fitting for backdrops and stages for most thrilling entertainments Don’t speak to Abraham’s literary children of magma hearts when human sacrifice by calculated proxy has become the liberal standard the emotions of rocks and still cursed planets is beneath our ruminations! Of course nothing can feel not fixable by laser or scalpel maybe chemical conflations We forget and abstract Not all gods pretend to be human And Time is greater not only a function of an equation When does the New Year Begin? At the party last night few ate the Black Eyed Peas Collard Greens and Aduki in aged Miso Sauce just to be sure. http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/12/19/photos-of-the-week_n_4475493.html Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 Having looked at the picture and begun to read, it came on like a premonition: industry meets primitive -- ... On the steam rising from Mount Ijen as the white masked Indonesian men in hard hats bury a goat’s head offering to the Volcano a traditional to the afore mentioned uncertainty to be more blessed than blighted ... How Quaint! How Primitive! Look at this in our Modern Age... -- though this picture, captured in the poem, is almost one of industrial revolution era industry meeting primitive. (I wonder what religion that is?) And then there's this highly unusual point of view that made me smile: A mountain is simply a poor design that impedes gainful development unless upgraded by ski lift and lodges it remains only fitting for backdrops and stages for most thrilling entertainments ... How accurate! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted January 9, 2014 Author Share Posted January 9, 2014 Thank You Tony for reviewing! And thanks for the feedback, as well as bringing my attention to the poem, because 2 essential lines were missing! And as I scrape the egg from my face- I see now the poem was far more abstract than it should have been- (not to say it isn't still a woeful abstraction, but at least now it has a couple of anchors;-) Thanks! Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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