dedalus Posted January 2, 2014 Posted January 2, 2014 yellow spots come dancing here before my eyes, and to my mild surprise appear to be really green. This is one of the strangest things I think I've ever seen. I know that when they end, I end, alone again, with no defence, yet sense that every single thing could safely stop beyond the fence, and all may yet be right, if I can see the morning before I see the night. Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim
fdelano Posted January 2, 2014 Posted January 2, 2014 A mild surprise from Brendan the bold. Enjoyed and agree with the sentiments. Speculation: could yellow turning to green be a reference to an Irishman living in Japan? ;) Quote
dr_con Posted January 2, 2014 Posted January 2, 2014 A bit o' fun. Reminds me of: "Before I lay me down to sleep... And if I die before I wake, I pray god my soul to take..." ;-) Juris Quote thegateless.org
dedalus Posted January 4, 2014 Author Posted January 4, 2014 A few small changes, most of them restoration of original lines & phrasing. I know it looks pretty simple ... but it is the opposite of simple to write! Cheers, Bren 新年おめでとうございます！ (Happy New Year) Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim
tonyv Posted January 9, 2014 Posted January 9, 2014 I like this very much. Dreamy -- I'll leave it at that. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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