JTParreira Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 A car door slamming in the night John Ashbery Your noise reached the house the house filled of light the windows It was opened curtains flew in the wind when you left your noise. J.T.Parreira Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 I like how the poem starts with your noise and comes full circle to end with your noise. I also like the layout of the poem. I'm not so familiar with Ashbery, so I'll check out some of his work. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodyday Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 this poem reminds me a breeze in which a voice is imposed, just blowing through the window and simultaneously enters in the holes of ears and penetrates the sense suddenly which produces a mild vibration in the brains, neurons and got a feelings that wish you could stay with me! what should i do: give her a call or let the feelings prevails my sense of apathy? may be it depend on the condition of a relationship! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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