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E-ssay About Mirrors


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JTParreira
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Brought it to the size of the mirror,he set himself

With great art to copy all that he saw in the glass

John Ashbery

 

 

Beyond my mirror

the faces

watching

 

they are attracted

to the vacuum

 

Inside the mirror, gestures

mimicking

life.

 

J.T.Parreira

Posted

This compact poem reads like a clever self portrait: the narrator is watched; his observers are somehow shallow; the narrator watches back.

 

Tony

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

Posted

Intriguing reflection.

 

Inside the mirror, gestures

mimicking

life.

 

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watching.....vacuum...mimicking....

I love the title.....but that's it.

Way too ambiguous for me........

not a good poem, in my dear consideration.....esp. for September....

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