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Three Haiku: This Mystical Place


Larsen M. Callirhoe
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Larsen M. Callirhoe

Three Haiku: This Mystical Place

 

 

I reach out for you.

We wish to find that far star.

We travel with love.

 

Together we fly

on this journey to heaven.

Hand in hand love guides us there

 

We don't hold our breaths.

It will not take long to get there.

Marriage dreams come true!

 

 

Larsen M. Callirhoe

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It will not take long to get there.

 

Joyous!

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Frank E Gibbard

Cheering to see you posting so well, good stuff Larse attempting the form is a challenge so congrats for it. Friendliest regards. Frank

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A very impressive fusion of content and form, Victor. Absolutely lovely. It's syled as three haiku, but it's really one comprehensive work (and one of your best).

 

Tony

 

 

PS -- All three haiku take me to another world. The last line is triumphant. Bravo!

Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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