Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted February 9, 2014 Share Posted February 9, 2014 Three Haiku: This Mystical Place I reach out for you. We wish to find that far star. We travel with love. Together we fly on this journey to heaven. Hand in hand love guides us there We don't hold our breaths. It will not take long to get there. Marriage dreams come true! Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted February 9, 2014 Share Posted February 9, 2014 It will not take long to get there. Joyous! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted February 10, 2014 Share Posted February 10, 2014 Cheering to see you posting so well, good stuff Larse attempting the form is a challenge so congrats for it. Friendliest regards. Frank Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dedalus Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 Ah, you old romantic! Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted February 17, 2014 Share Posted February 17, 2014 A very impressive fusion of content and form, Victor. Absolutely lovely. It's syled as three haiku, but it's really one comprehensive work (and one of your best). Tony PS -- All three haiku take me to another world. The last line is triumphant. Bravo! Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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