dr_con Posted February 10, 2014 Share Posted February 10, 2014 Oysters & Artichokes Any Romantic worthy of the name must be obliged by their initiatory office held to hate with a certain passion the nightmare collusion of Capital and the Trobador invention of Love as part and parcel of the privilege accorded to Landowner lust whose uses include: Subjectification of intimacy Profiting from biological bias and a mobius mesh colander of mores and sensibilities roughly chopping pleasure’s distillates into coky coals burned for the infernal engines of commerce I’m just saying its hard to like Valentine’s Day But when you say I tried many things for the first time when i met you It is the greatest gift this willingness to refine possibilities to stretch definitions to grudgingly release attachments and embrace the underlying deep opalescent humanity of Great Love not obfuscated boxes of chocolates poor vulvate sigils or codified exchanges between owner and owned monetized miracles but rather the simple sharing of artichokes and oysters glyphs of our Infinite Heart. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 Sigil and glyph.....can't go wrong with them! Nice. "The nightmare collusion".....very strong. "To stretch definitions".....even stronger. I don't know of two other objects bedsides artichokes and oysters that would be better. Of course,this is a timely ode to this advertising-filled holiday. Not grouchy, but practical. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dedalus Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 I’m just saying its hard to like Valentine’s Day I love the sudden interjection of this line! Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted February 11, 2014 Author Share Posted February 11, 2014 Thanks! Yes, bren I'm glad it worked for you, I laughed when I wrote that line- so I'm very happy it works for others. Thanks to you both for indulging me! Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 Lots of great lines to assimilate with wry smiles. Particularly liked the last stanza.. also ... "The nightmare collusion of Capital etc." and "Profiting from biological bias"...Conjures with my thoughts of battery hens conditioned to feed whenever the lights are systematically switched on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 What appropriate thoughts as this holiday approaches. Heavy phrases as well that synched with the tone of the speaker. Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted February 13, 2014 Author Share Posted February 13, 2014 Thank you Geoff and JJ for reading and commenting! I appreciate the feedback and I The battery cage image is just brilliant! ;-) Thanks, Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted February 17, 2014 Share Posted February 17, 2014 I love how it comes full circle from cynical to romantic (in the classic sense). I agree with Brendan's remark. The placement of that line is relieving and, thus, mandatory! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted February 19, 2014 Author Share Posted February 19, 2014 Thanks Tony- I'm glad it worked for you! ;-) J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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