dr_con Posted February 19, 2014 Share Posted February 19, 2014 To Know and Keep Silence Enlightenment is when the intellect gets stuck in the quiet Swami said and I agree not in the way you think because we are poets after-all rhymes with After the Fall and we have thin skin either by breeding or nature or in my case violations by Earth Fire Ice Metal Air disguised as words before ill nurtured breath The ground broke bones embers scarred skins knives cut digits and the Water that feeds muscle and nerves propels fists afraid of my difference my epidermis of Other And we wouldn’t have it any-other way We feel they are not worthy of giving us love And we build armour to suit us with words to cover the Silence and practice magics of some disrepute defending our transubstated grimoires curses and hexes As proper grammar spelling and syntax Straw Men guarding our shores from the roaring inefable Knowing Shhhhh. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted February 19, 2014 Share Posted February 19, 2014 Great message and great work on letting the reader create his private beginning and ending of sentences and thoughts. Yes, we all have different inherences of epidermis. Enjoyed muchly. (Yes, I know that's not a word, but now it is. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted February 20, 2014 Share Posted February 20, 2014 Agree with Frank about the fluidity of the sentences from lack of punctuation. Inventive. Especially liked: grimoires curses and hexes Cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted February 21, 2014 Author Share Posted February 21, 2014 Thanks you two- Glad you enjoyed! ;-) J Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted February 24, 2014 Share Posted February 24, 2014 You have a knack of prompting the readers mien; it leads me to think of the way that euphemism is used to disguise harsh realities by the skilful orator/ operator. But that's just me.... G. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted February 26, 2014 Author Share Posted February 26, 2014 Thanks g! Sorry to be behind in my reviews (and year s that was part of my intent) but here's my current view: Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
douglas Posted March 1, 2014 Share Posted March 1, 2014 This is totally brilliant and trippy - love it! Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted March 3, 2014 Author Share Posted March 3, 2014 Many, many thanks Douglas appreciate the read and engagement! Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 14, 2014 Share Posted April 14, 2014 When Dr. Con sets up "syntax Straw Men" it's not to distract us; he wants us to look deeper. "And we woudn't have it/any-other way." Enjoyed, Tony PS - Particularly notable: my epidermis/of Other Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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