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my love she never came


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My love she never came
instead i got the ocean rain
pouring down in my room,
the raven rapping at my door
preserves my spirit in its winter tomb.

My love she never came
instead i got the winter snow
The cunning wind blowing at my door,
chants my loves name forever more.
My love she never came

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Nice one, and badge is right about the echoes of Poe.

 

Cheers,

Brendan

Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim

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Larsen M. Callirhoe

Hello Eclipse, I too will echo the sentiments that this is Poe-ques and this is smooth on the eyes to read. Really enjoyed the enchanting write so thank you for sharing.

 

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Frank E Gibbard

With the raven and forever more the Poe comparisons are inevitable and the blackish mood. Very effective I thought Eclipse. Only nit use of the little i, a personal bugbear, sorry to say. Good to see your work as ever. Frank

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