Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Something Told Me It Is Not To Late To AskMy sypathetic words don't expressmy lack of foresight sometimesin this crazy world we call home.I wish I could go back in time and wavea magic wand over the hands of timeand relive the moment I missed the mark.It was on that special remembered daythat I was suppose to expresshow I truly feel for you.You see all the romance that birds sing when dawn appearsduring every morning sunrise still couldn't explainhow much you capture my heart like these birds chirping away.Every move you make is heavenly poetry for me to gaze upon.The words you speak are divine coming from your heart and thoughts.After all of this accept my apology because I believe you are special.When the river freezes over and the wind stops blowingthis must be a mystical sign from above to let me realizethat it is not to late in words to let you know we belong.This is all I can ask and I promise to make the sparks lastso we can gently touch and embrace like the sun shines in the sky.You see everyday you are truly the only Valentine I want to be with. A/ N: This was done for a poetry contest on another forum. The rules were it had to be about Valentine's Day after the day passed and your significant other was not happy about the fact that you forgot him or her. You could not use any form of the word 'LOVE' in the write and no rhyming at the end of each line progressively. I think I did fairly well, but got no remarks on the piece because I entered it about 20 minutes before the contest ended Sunday night/ Monday morning at 12:00 am. I think I did a bang up job on the piece. Sorry I have been a stranger to the forum, but I write my poems and copy and paste em. And, Internet Explorer has been acting up ever since they moved from web browser 9 and now I am using web browser 11 of Internet explorer. I was able to copy and paste this using Google Chrome and I had no problem copying and pasting the piece. So I might post several pieces over the next several days, but I promise to comment on at least 3 pieces for everyone that I post here on Poetry Magnum Opus. Missed you guys and I really miss Rhyme Guy, AlekSandra, Goldenlanger, PawnShop, and a few others that I haven't seen post in over 3 years. I love all you guys. Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Stringent rule: You could not use any form of the word 'LOVE'..... i think you more than complied there! Very fluid and easy piece, like natural conversation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted February 25, 2014 Share Posted February 25, 2014 Lash, your work always impresses me as heartfelt. What could be a better valentine? Enjoyed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted April 14, 2014 Share Posted April 14, 2014 Very nice work, Victor. A love poem that doesn't mention love -- it shows, it doesn't tell. Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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