dedalus Posted May 23, 2014 Share Posted May 23, 2014 I live in hopes of things to come,crystal cities with suspended bridges connecting shop to shop, bar to bar,man to womanand in my dreams at nightI toss and turn on the lilac sheetsand reach for my true lovewho is no longer there.A silly quarrel, of no importance,and a world comes crashing downamid the rubble on the just-cleaned carpetsand shots outside on the streets.I was mildly ruffled. I don’t mindtelling you, as this effectively ruinedall our luncheon arrangementsand I gave her my debit card.O God, can things get worse?Well of course they can.I have newspaper reporters calling me at three in the morningwith questions about school escapadesand did I really climb the college towerin Lady Cynthia’s panties? This is too much,seeing as how she climbed it with meand we swore undying love. Later, she married the Hon, Spencer Chapman MPand pushed him off a mountainin Switzerland, or so the story goes.I went to Afghanistan with the Armywhere I formed the deepest respectfor the bearded Taliban. They are crack shotssince 1842, so you keep your head down.Back in London, I had to choosebetween the City and the Law,so I became a social workerand loved that silly job to bits.Now, of course, I am a policeman. Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted May 23, 2014 Share Posted May 23, 2014 Colourful and inventive imagery that by the last line had made the word 'rambunctious' pop into my head for no particular reason-- along with a smile. G. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted May 25, 2014 Share Posted May 25, 2014 Agree with g, a sharp rambunctious portrait... well executed and made me smile.. Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dedalus Posted May 26, 2014 Author Share Posted May 26, 2014 Made me smile, too. It was fun to write and I fear I got carried away, just a wee bit, so I and went overboard and added lot of rather good literary Japanese which few Europeans or Americans,can undetand. Well, that's all been swept away. Quote Drown your sorrows in drink, by all means, but the real sorrows can swim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted June 5, 2014 Share Posted June 5, 2014 I like the subtle change in this poem. the first four verses are more universal and could apply to many people in many situations. The rest of it becomes the speaker's narrative. Entertaining, as always. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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