dcmarti1 Posted June 19, 2014 Posted June 19, 2014 These are, admittedly, tongue-in-cheek. A little overly dramatic, but there are no lies here. Huitains for prague, or humour amidst the panicFearing PragueThis will be no mere diversion:my past, my future will residein this shadow of incursiononto great Europe's Central pride.My present life is not so wideas to be used for marking time;Prague must therefore become the guideto deem it lost or paradigm.Anticipating PragueWith all the porn that I have seen,with all the boys I've taken home,for sex in Prague I am not keen:it's only castle, keep, and tome.A sidestep to the country loamwhere none demand identity,where feet and soul are free to roam -the other possibility.Experiencing PragueI slept on stones at Jelenov,beheld the stars that they but see,was hurt before I could take offand run to where I want to be.Roaming Her land that is now free,the iron drape tattered and torn,Her testament's no mystery:That we, like Faith, must be reborn. Quote
dr_con Posted June 19, 2014 Posted June 19, 2014 Loverly. Made me smile, and yes see Prague through a unique lens! Enjoyed! Juris Quote thegateless.org
Benjamin Posted June 21, 2014 Posted June 21, 2014 The city has a colourful history and escaped much damage of old architecture in WW2. Never been there myself but I've enjoyed the tales of friends who have, including yours G. Quote
tonyv Posted July 8, 2014 Posted July 8, 2014 I very much like your style and subjects, Marti. This piece is both open and mysterious. It's like pondering my own roots in eastern Europe. Though there are things I know about them, familiarities that I can sense, there are things that remain unsanswered. In all, a level of profoundness that gives me pause. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
tonyv Posted July 8, 2014 Posted July 8, 2014 I'd like to add one more thing. The iambic tetrameter in the second and third stanzas is impeccable. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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