Frank E Gibbard Posted July 9, 2014 Posted July 9, 2014 ####### Teutonic storm from the Atlantic, beleagured nation's driven frantic. Pleasure on the beach is sparse, beauteous game's unfunny farce; tears aplenty in bereaved Brazil, inglorious end: once golden skill. No samba drum, nor bossa nova, world's carnival is too soon over. Quote
Tinker Posted July 9, 2014 Posted July 9, 2014 Ah tight and succinct, the frame of this poem fits well with its tone and subject. Nice work Frank! ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
dr_con Posted July 11, 2014 Posted July 11, 2014 Apt! And a good reaction to a global football moment! Quote thegateless.org
tonyv Posted July 22, 2014 Posted July 22, 2014 Who won? Was it USA again? Nice use of "carnival," Frank. It evokes carneval. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
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