JoelJosol Posted August 22, 2014 Share Posted August 22, 2014 The crowing of the rooster fills my ears, in a few more twist and turns daylightwill lit the pavement of a wandering mind. Sleep slips away, unwilling to stopor look behind, not one glanceat dark shadows from last night.The ceiling is my projection screen,to where the eyes throw the scenes,familiar faces and dialogues streaminglike a downpour overwhelming sanity,vanity, and drowning with fear, catchingbreath- raise the hand, signal for helpbut from what? From unrealities- stitched to fix the holes of an existence, to keep memories intact from spilling onto the bed, disoriented from restlessness, from the ticks of the clock, from yet another morning. My doctor ordered a one-week bed rest due to a viral attack in my system. That gave me an opportunity to write and visit this site again :-) Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted August 24, 2014 Share Posted August 24, 2014 Nice to see you, Joel. Don't let too many of those viral images slip off the bed without finding their way into a nice little package like this. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted August 25, 2014 Share Posted August 25, 2014 A nice balance of vowel sounds and sibilance... And a lucid familiarity for all insomniacs. I particularly liked the second verse. G Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JoelJosol Posted August 27, 2014 Author Share Posted August 27, 2014 Thanks Dave for the read. I am glad too I was able to find time to come back. Those viral images and words have been lingering for a while and I wondered if I should get up and write a poem :-) Thanks Benjamin. It is really about insomniacs :-) Quote "Words are not things, and yet they are not non-things either." - Ann Lauterbach Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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