David W. Parsley Posted November 2, 2014 Share Posted November 2, 2014 Van Gogh's Pipe Written upon seeing the Van Gogh Collectionkept at AmsterdamYou could say it is dying, guttural glow scantstain on the stoic blotches and unwinking lids.It has labored this day wafting between coughsto augment aroma of oils and inkin the misshapen chamber.Ashes lie on the bandage where the bullet went in.At the sound of startled crows the pipe’s flameflutters a few beats in the dimness above the bed.Dimensions of the room convergein wake of those retreating cries,frame a lone chair poised at the final wallmasking for all but the least mutilous earthe errant flock’s rotation to fields still ripening,one stark against that afamilial skybackward flying in blue light among his fellowswild with the imagined strengthof the heavens, his own interminable gaze. Published Lothlorien Poetry Journal 2022Member blog announcement© 2014 David W. ParsleyParsley Poetry Collection Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted November 3, 2014 Share Posted November 3, 2014 wild with the imagined strength of the heavens That is some damn good poetry.....AND theology, IMHO. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted November 4, 2014 Share Posted November 4, 2014 Outstanding poetry with imagery that flows, swirls and draws the reader in.... rather like the artists own provocative work. Much enjoyed. Geoff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted November 8, 2014 Share Posted November 8, 2014 i agree superb work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted November 10, 2014 Share Posted November 10, 2014 Effective change of pace in the poem to picture the drama, disorientation. Love the detail of the lone chair. all the best badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frank E Gibbard Posted November 19, 2014 Share Posted November 19, 2014 A great portrait of the artist via the atmospheric implications you convey beautifully. Terrific David. Frank Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 23, 2014 Author Share Posted November 23, 2014 wild with the imagined strength of the heavens That is some damn good poetry.....AND theology, IMHO. :) Hi dc, interesting that you gravitated to this image and language. The image is inspired by what is reputedly (disputedly?) the last work of Vincent Van Gogh, "Wheatfield with Crows": [https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/f8/A_Vincent_Van_Gogh.jpg] The perspective is another matter, and I am reluctant to be too explicit about my aims. This is partly due to the poet's common respect for each reader's need to take his/her own experience and response to symbol from a poem. But I will say that at least part of what I wished to capture was Vincent's own frame of mind at the time of his suicide. Among other things he was feeling a measure of hopelessness about his condition. In addition, his communications with his brother, Theo, indicate he believed that a force somewhat like fate was restraining artists from achieving recognition until after their deaths. (Becoming a familiar thought.) In any case, I am grateful for your appreciation of the poem. Best Regards, - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 23, 2014 Author Share Posted November 23, 2014 A great portrait of the artist via the atmospheric implications you convey beautifully. Terrific David. Frank Hi Frank, thank you for your gracious tribute. I actually had a few self-portraits in mind while composing this: Cheers, - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 23, 2014 Author Share Posted November 23, 2014 ... Love the detail of the lone chair. all the best badge This one had a specific painting in mind, too. Thank you, badger. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 23, 2014 Author Share Posted November 23, 2014 Outstanding poetry with imagery that flows, swirls and draws the reader in.... rather like the artists own provocative work. Much enjoyed. Geoff.Geoff, I do not have specific paintings to pair with your insightful (as always) remarks. Rather you tap into the whole expressionistic mode of the great painter and the poem's attempt to echo that. Thank You, - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 23, 2014 Author Share Posted November 23, 2014 i agree superb workThanks for the deep compliment, Barry. - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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