fdelano Posted January 26, 2015 Share Posted January 26, 2015 Our skins separate us even as their touch communicates feelings. Eyes read signals from other eyes, unspoken language visions. Your perfume or sweat tells me come here or hold your nose. Your words appeal or even blast me back with love or deafness. I taste your lust or reluctance of lush or thin lips and tongue. There are also emanations sent from and received in mystery. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted January 27, 2015 Share Posted January 27, 2015 I taste your lust or reluctance Richly erotic, dense with.....passion. Another emotive one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted January 28, 2015 Share Posted January 28, 2015 One that drips with the complexities, eroticism and ambiguities of human sensation... that we are never too old to appreciate. Well done! G. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdelano Posted January 28, 2015 Author Share Posted January 28, 2015 Thank you, Marti & Geoff. I feared this one to be too gimmicky, using the senses to relate connections in the "human condition." The words are much more complex in my mind than they might appear as written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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