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Stimuli


fdelano
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Our skins separate us even

as their touch communicates

feelings.

 

Eyes read signals from other

eyes, unspoken language

visions.

 

Your perfume or sweat tells

me come here or hold your

nose.

 

Your words appeal or even

blast me back with love or

deafness.

 

I taste your lust or reluctance

of lush or thin lips and

tongue.

 

There are also emanations

sent from and received in

mystery.

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I taste your lust or reluctance

 

Richly erotic, dense with.....passion. Another emotive one.

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One that drips with the complexities, eroticism and ambiguities of human sensation... that we are never too old to appreciate. :smile: Well done! G.

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Thank you, Marti & Geoff. I feared this one to be too gimmicky, using the senses to relate connections in the "human condition." The words are much more complex in my mind than they might appear as written.

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