Randver Askmadr Posted January 29, 2015 Share Posted January 29, 2015 I cannot come home to you my love My journey is not done I would love to see you just once more But there are many miles to run I cannot come home to you right now I am fighting a great war It is all inside my head they say From being in the Corps I cannot come home to see you dear I am to dangerous right now I would love to touch your pretty face And take our wedding vows I will soon be home with you my love My journey is almost through Just one step is all that's left The proud the brave the few I am finally home with you my love That body is just a shell I am standing right beside you love Too bad you cannot tell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 I am standing right beside you love Too bad you cannot tell Um, wow. Makes the reader (at least moi) very empathetic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randver Askmadr Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 Thanks, was written for a buddy that couldn't take it anymore. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 An interesting emotive perspective that coincides with the recent war poems posted here. Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted February 2, 2015 Share Posted February 2, 2015 A heartfelt poetic outpouring. enjoyed! Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Randver Askmadr Posted February 5, 2015 Author Share Posted February 5, 2015 Thank you all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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