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I came to love the senses after

the robin returned, winter's breath

became warm. I savoured sound and

vision hearing the robin sing, his

red breast a heart on stilts. My senses

are raised in the summer when he

sits on my apple tree of red and

is silent.

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his red breast a heart on stilts.....

 

Well done. Certainly meets that old poetic adage, "Show, don't tell!"

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A clear concise poetic painting.

 

Very enjoyable!

 

Juris

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