eclipse Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 I came to love the senses after the robin returned, winter's breath became warm. I savoured sound and vision hearing the robin sing, his red breast a heart on stilts. My senses are raised in the summer when he sits on my apple tree of red and is silent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 his red breast a heart on stilts..... Well done. Certainly meets that old poetic adage, "Show, don't tell!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_con Posted February 18, 2015 Share Posted February 18, 2015 A clear concise poetic painting. Very enjoyable! Juris Quote thegateless.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Benjamin Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 A pleasant reminder of our seasons change with one foot almost in the Spring. G. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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