douglas Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 The crushing punishment of your silencesWeighing down my soulWith a deep, mournful contritionAn effective, invisible weaponHandled with precisionTo judge and chastiseMy vulnerabilities and imperfectionsAnd the quiet, burning twist within my chestWhispering guilt, regret and shameAs each day passes with reticenceCrushing my spiritAnd making me feel like a pariahFor having unravelledThis static, relentless castigationA sentence for my offencesA transparent spearNegating me Quote To receive love, you have to give it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted June 6, 2015 Share Posted June 6, 2015 Your versatility shows. The London poem is heartfelt, but so is this....at the opposite end of the relationship pendulum. "Transparent spear".....nice literary phrase. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 Yes, that is a nice image. With an edge! Your versatility shows. The London poem is heartfelt, but so is this....at the opposite end of the relationship pendulum. "Transparent spear".....nice literary phrase. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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