eclipse Posted September 23, 2015 Share Posted September 23, 2015 One human life, a tear falling finitely from ventriloquist earth, the stuttering breath of solipsism chuntering about war. A whale screams in the ocean, a tear that briefly belongs to death, time his hand puppet will not accord with the umbilical cord of the false womb of earth' s electric lights. From a distance the moon moves the tides, an archetype marooned is raised closer to the collective mind of man, perhaps a supernatural injection coming to fruition. A rocket lands on the moon, the blindfold of history's tapestry falls from the eyes of the world. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poetjohncompton Posted October 12, 2015 Share Posted October 12, 2015 i love the imagery. you are quite nice putting all the things together with your glue. ...time his hand puppet will not accord with the umbilical cord of the false womb of earth' s electric lights. my favorite part! Quote https://www.facebook.com/poetjohncompton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted October 18, 2015 Share Posted October 18, 2015 Hi Barry, nicely tightened and even amplified in the revision process! Compliments! - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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