eclipse Posted November 4, 2015 Share Posted November 4, 2015 The sun's fire burned through the earth's skull-as an untenanted planet formed. First rays of the moon pre-empted a premise, an electric iris. First flames on earth catheterized consciousness. Did I preexist in dual forms as ciphers of light in God's mind next to ghosted earth in silhouette. Light in the night time sky from dying stars suggest the form I will eventually assume.In the womb I saw an angel with a torch searching for a special child, she couldn't contact heaven and instead dialed the sun, left a lighthouse deep in the recesses of my mind, would on occasion climb stairs to illuminate unlit windows, radiance passing through my eyes would reach moribund stars. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larsen M. Callirhoe Posted November 5, 2015 Share Posted November 5, 2015 hi eclipse, what a cool read. reminded me of the brightness of a greek citizen that made a light laser beam in the 400 bc i believe. i can't remember his name archimedes i think and the date might me wrong but he was proved right on history channel. i9t was aq cool history channel show. much enjoyed..... victor Quote Larsen M. Callirhoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 7, 2015 Share Posted November 7, 2015 A fine sonnetesque effort, Barry. My only regret is the concluding "moribund stars" - seems like an unworthy object cloud to which the internal illuminations reach. If nothing else, just put "David Parsley" in there - the light reached me! :) But seriously, how about receipt by something/somebody(ies) awakening, or ... Nice work! - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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