Jump to content
Poetry Magnum Opus

The Monster In The Closet


Larsen M. Callirhoe
 Share

Recommended Posts

Larsen M. Callirhoe
The Monster In The Closet


Why is it everytime i go to bed

the red man with a harry face

hovers over my bed when i go to sleep

in the dark leaving my closet

to the roaches his minions.


As soon as i pray his name

and turn the lights on

his vioice speaks to me and if i

ignore him he flickers the light

and it goes out. Then there

is screaming in my ears.

Larsen M. Callirhoe

Link to comment
Share on other sites

WOW! if I had these nightmares I would seek help to find out WHY!!!

Wishing you more pleasant dreams. YarnSpinner

 

As a writer...only a suggestion... since you do not punctuate your sentences, would the statements flowmore easily to be read? I submit a possible suggestion.

 

Why is it everytime i go to bed

the red man with a harry face

leaves my closet to his roaches and minions

and in the dark he hovers over my bed

when i go to sleep

 

As soon as i pray his name

and turn the lights on

his vioice speaks to me

if i ignore him he flickers the light

it goes out, then there is screaming in my ears

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

 Share

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By using this site, you agree to our Guidelines.