Miss Sharon Posted January 25, 2016 Posted January 25, 2016 A TENDER WEAPON Beneath the smile which often sits Upon the lover's waiting lips There lies a truth which can't be found Within the chambers' secret sound Beholden there with much aplomb To hold the dream as it unfolds There lives a message from the grave Of one whose name is lost...to save This tender weapon of the heart Now bids the lovers never part Where lies the truth of greater worth This love was never meant for earth ** © 2016 Miss Sharon Quote
tonyv Posted February 17, 2016 Posted February 17, 2016 The last line sums up much of much love perfectly. There's unconditional love, and then for many (or maybe even most of us), there's in love with love. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
abstrect-christ Posted June 20, 2016 Posted June 20, 2016 love can be the ultimate weapon be it good or bad.nice little poem. Quote Pinhead "Unbearable, isn't it? The suffering of strangers, the agony of friends. There is a secret song at the center of the world, Joey, and its sound is like razors through flesh." Joey "I don't believe you." Pinhead "Oh come, you can hear its faint echo right now. I'm here to turn up the volume. To press the stinking face of humanity into the dark blood of its own secret heart." "There's a starving beast inside my chestplaying with me until he's boredThen, slowly burying his tusks in my fleshcrawling his way out he rips open old woundsWhen I reach for the knife placed on the bedside tableits blade reflects my determined faceto plant it in my chestand carve a hole so deep it snaps my veinsHollow me out, I want to feel empty"-- "Being Able To Feel Nothing" by Oathbreakerhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aBPy3xNwwL8 "Sky turns to a deeper grey the sun fades by the moon hell's come from the distant hills tortures dreams of the doomed and they pray, yet they prey and they pray, still they prey"-- "Still They Prey" by Coughhttps://soundcloud.com/relapserecords/sets/cough-still-they-pray
Tinker Posted June 26, 2016 Posted June 26, 2016 Wow, I'm sorry I missed this when it was first posted. I hope Miss Sharon, you haven't left us. This is a skillfully written Couplets Sonnet in iambic tetrameter. It is tight and somber and it reminds me a little of an old English Ballad, The Unquiet Grave from the 1400s. This a little late Welcome and I hope you check in again and share more of your work. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
Benjamin Posted June 27, 2016 Posted June 27, 2016 Doing a little catching up here myself and pleasantly surprised by this little gem. Quote
dr_con Posted July 9, 2016 Posted July 9, 2016 Echo everyone else's sentiments, a beautiful poem about love. A worthy contribution to Magnum Opus Quote thegateless.org
Miss Sharon Posted July 10, 2016 Author Posted July 10, 2016 Wow, I'm sorry I missed this when it was first posted. I hope Miss Sharon, you haven't left us. This is a skillfully written Couplets Sonnet in iambic tetrameter. It is tight and somber and it reminds me a little of an old English Ballad, The Unquiet Grave from the 1400s. This a little late Welcome and I hope you check in again and share more of your work. ~~Tink Hello Tink! I am trying to learn to navigate the site and do intend to post more of my over 2,000 poems. Thank you for your lovely words to me! ~Sharon Quote
Miss Sharon Posted July 10, 2016 Author Posted July 10, 2016 Echo everyone else's sentiments, a beautiful poem about love. A worthy contribution to Magnum Opus Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm new here and trying to understand how to navigate the site. ~Sharon Quote
Miss Sharon Posted July 10, 2016 Author Posted July 10, 2016 Doing a little catching up here myself and pleasantly surprised by this little gem. Thank you kindly Benjamin for your kind words! I'm trying to learn how to navigate the site. ~Sharon Quote
Miss Sharon Posted July 10, 2016 Author Posted July 10, 2016 Echo everyone else's sentiments, a beautiful poem about love. A worthy contribution to Magnum Opus Thank you ever so much for your nice response to this write! ~Sharon Quote
Miss Sharon Posted July 10, 2016 Author Posted July 10, 2016 The last line sums up much of much love perfectly. There's unconditional love, and then for many (or maybe even most of us), there's in love with love. Tony Thank you kind sir for your nice comments! ~Sharon Quote
Miss Sharon Posted July 10, 2016 Author Posted July 10, 2016 love can be the ultimate weapon be it good or bad. nice little poem. Thank you kind sir! ~Sharon Quote
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