eclipse Posted February 11, 2016 Share Posted February 11, 2016 The old tree in Sligo died between a false moon projected by the ghost of Yeats and a false ghost of him created by the moon. The false phantom sits at the top of the tree in silhouette mouthing verse as it's spirit sails away, words fall from branches, they will land demanding an authentic inquiring Irish tongue. Senators seek synthetic light into their darkness as they protect a singular address from which they impress upon the public, creaking paradigms, arthritic rhymes. The spirit of a dead poet wears the night's black coat- emptying the pockets of stars-the moon resting on his tongue will never make contact with the orb in his eyes. Two Irish states are too close to dance, their is an incantation in the confluence as the day shakes out the newly born, falling into existence. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted February 14, 2016 Share Posted February 14, 2016 Hi Barry, I can't help thinking the old master would take a wry, piquant pleasure in this piece. In some ways it reminds me of a sonnet by Wordsworth titled, "London, 1802." There is an unmistakable sense that the poet is saying within himself, "Yeats, thou shouldst be living at this hour: Ireland hath need of thee!" In your piece, the grizzled poet and dissident, indeed is shown as having "dwelt apart" but could yet be looking on in the guise of a shifting phantom, perhaps no more than a trick of the moonlight. The spirit existence is evoked with image and language somewhat reminiscent of the early phase of Yeats' poetic oeuvre, dream-like and ethereal. Nice! - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted February 15, 2016 Author Share Posted February 15, 2016 hi There David-thank you-good to see you here_barry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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