goldenlangur Posted May 19, 2009 Posted May 19, 2009 waxing moon on my laptop - not a single word goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
Aleksandra Posted May 19, 2009 Posted May 19, 2009 Yes, small but lovely. This speaks for itself goldenlangur Waxing moon - I love that one. Very nice my friend. Aleksandra Quote The poet is a liar who always speaks the truth - Jean Cocteau History of Macedonia
Lake Posted May 19, 2009 Posted May 19, 2009 waxing moonon my laptop - not a single word goldenlangur Not in this case, Golden. You have a haiku here. Seriously, I see the contrast of waxing moon and not a single word - the moon becomes larger and larger, but not a single word is written. And it is at night which to some people is the best time to write. As usual, it has such a solitary feel to it. Lake Quote
tonyv Posted May 19, 2009 Posted May 19, 2009 I agree with Lake, when she says, "You have a haiku here." It makes me think of THIS image. Now, there's a waxing moon for your laptop! I hope it will inspire another fabulous haiku! Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Bloodyday Posted May 19, 2009 Posted May 19, 2009 it's a haiku........but a modern haiku. moon is waxing like the time depletes. our life just comes to an end unnoticed.in one fine morning, we come to know the adventure is just like a dream of a fortnight. always try to watch the dream in replay, but the time is up....blood runs cold (Def Leppard) the haiku is great! RoNy Quote
goldenlangur Posted May 19, 2009 Author Posted May 19, 2009 What a wonderful thing to say, Aleksandra!: small but lovely So glad that you like the 'waxing moon' detail. Thank you very much, goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
goldenlangur Posted May 19, 2009 Author Posted May 19, 2009 Hi Lake, You bring a great sensitivity in your reading and lend a wonderfully attuned ear to the nuances of the haiku form. I appreciate how you express this: Lake wrote: Seriously, I see the contrast of waxing moon and not a single word - the moon becomes larger and larger, but not a single word is written. And it is at night which to some people is the best time to write. Lake I could not wish for a more Also grateful that you picked on the 'solitary' here. Thank you so much goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
goldenlangur Posted May 19, 2009 Author Posted May 19, 2009 Hi Tony, Clicked on the link you gave and what a truly glorious sight it is! I'm both humbled and touched that my piece took to that fabulous scene. If such a waxing moon cast its glow on the laptop, how could the Muse refuse? At least, I hope A big thank you. goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
goldenlangur Posted May 19, 2009 Author Posted May 19, 2009 Hi RoNy, Thank you for this great reading: modern haiku Your thoughts here are truly eloquent!: moon is waxing like the time depletes. our life just comes to an end unnoticed.in one fine morning, we come to know the adventure is just like a dream of a fortnight. always try to watch the dream in replay, but the time is up....blood runs cold (Def Leppard) With appreciation, goldenlangur Quote goldenlangur Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.
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