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waxing moon

on my laptop -

not a single word

 

 

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Aleksandra

Yes, small but lovely. This speaks for itself goldenlangur

Waxing moon - I love that one.

 

Very nice my friend.

 

Aleksandra

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waxing moon

on my laptop -

not a single word

 

 

goldenlangur

 

Not in this case, Golden. You have a haiku here. icon_smile.gif

 

Seriously, I see the contrast of waxing moon and not a single word - the moon becomes larger and larger, but not a single word is written. And it is at night which to some people is the best time to write.

 

As usual, it has such a solitary feel to it.

 

Lake

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I agree with Lake, when she says, "You have a haiku here." icon_smile.gif It makes me think of THIS image. Now, there's a waxing moon for your laptop! I hope it will inspire another fabulous haiku!

 

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it's a haiku........but a modern haiku.

 

moon is waxing like the time depletes. our life just comes to an end unnoticed.in one fine morning, we come to know the adventure is just like a dream of a fortnight.

 

always try to watch the dream in replay, but the time is up....blood runs cold (Def Leppard)

 

 

the haiku is great!

 

 

RoNy

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goldenlangur

What a wonderful thing to say, Aleksandra!:

 

small but lovely

 

So glad that you like the 'waxing moon' detail. icon_smile.gif

 

 

 

Thank you very much,

 

goldenlangur

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goldenlangur

Hi Lake,

 

You bring a great sensitivity in your reading and lend a wonderfully attuned ear to the nuances of the haiku form.

 

I appreciate how you express this:

Lake wrote:

 

Seriously, I see the contrast of
waxing moon
and
not a single word
- the moon becomes larger and larger, but not a single word is written. And it is at night which to some people is the best time to write.

 

Lake

 

I could not wish for a more icon_smile.gif Also grateful that you picked on the 'solitary' here.

 

Thank you so much icon_smile.gif

 

 

 

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur

Hi Tony,

 

Clicked on the link you gave and what a truly glorious sight it is!

 

 

I'm both humbled and touched that my piece took to that fabulous scene. If such a waxing moon cast its glow on the laptop, how could the Muse refuse? At least, I hope icon_wink.gif

 

A big thank you.

 

goldenlangur

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Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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goldenlangur

Hi RoNy,

 

Thank you for this great reading:

 

modern haiku

 

 

Your thoughts here are truly eloquent!:

 

moon is waxing like the time depletes. our life just comes to an end

unnoticed.in one fine morning, we come to know the adventure is just

like a dream of a fortnight.

 

always try to watch the dream in replay, but the time is up....blood runs cold (Def Leppard)

 

 

With appreciation,

 

goldenlangur

goldenlangur

 

 

Even a single enemy is too many and a thousand friends too few - Bhutanese saying.

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