Time in time.

[douglas]

And we move through life, propelled by love and passion,

Towards the destinies we create and make manifest together,

Until we attain peace and fulfillment; the fullness of time, in time;

As the blossom waits for the sunlight

In order to unfurl and bloom and spread its fragrance;
Or as new lovers' lips spontaneously pressing together,

Meeting softly for the first kiss, in silver moonlight.

[rhymeguy]

​Hi,

I very much enjoyed the beauty of this verse. I have made a few suggestions for your consideration as you may note below. I am certainly not an editor or that great a poet. Do as you wish with them- just my thoughts

And we move through life, propelled by love and passion,

towards the destinies we create and make manifest together,

until we attain peace and fulfillment; the fullness of time, in time;

as the blossom awaits the sunlight, to bloom and spread its fragrance;

as new lovers' lips spontaneously press together, meeting softly

for the first kiss, in silver moonlight.

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