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  • 4 weeks later...
David W. Parsley

Hi badger,


I like the way this one moves, its concrete simplicity. You might de-italicize the end, as the spacing provides all the emphasis needed.



- Dave

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  • 3 months later...

It's precisely this kind of work that got me excited about poetry to begin with. There were more conventional styles, too -- I especially liked Sandburg -- but I can remember how the works of Cummings first opened my eyes to the range of possibilities in poetry.


This one is perfect for today. We had a cold snap for the past two days, but today feels like the poem, like March again (44F/6.5C).



Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic

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