badger11 Posted October 28, 2016 Share Posted October 28, 2016 chair left out-side,just e noughconfettito carrythis sky in-side,& I may sayMarchblossomorlatesnowor a w e d d e d b l i s sof both Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted November 22, 2016 Share Posted November 22, 2016 Hi badger, I like the way this one moves, its concrete simplicity. You might de-italicize the end, as the spacing provides all the emphasis needed. Thank, - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted November 23, 2016 Author Share Posted November 23, 2016 Thank you very much David. Will ponder your suggestion. best badge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted March 6, 2017 Share Posted March 6, 2017 It's precisely this kind of work that got me excited about poetry to begin with. There were more conventional styles, too -- I especially liked Sandburg -- but I can remember how the works of Cummings first opened my eyes to the range of possibilities in poetry. This one is perfect for today. We had a cold snap for the past two days, but today feels like the poem, like March again (44F/6.5C). Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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