badger11 Posted November 25, 2016 Share Posted November 25, 2016 I haven't heard of this one, but interesting slant: Its rhythms are sound, and could be emphasized merely by putting a comma after they come—which would, in effect, create a caesura to play the part of a demoted syllable, thus allowing you two stressed syllable in a row that still feel essentially iambic.They come, shambling past for my review Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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