eclipse Posted December 17, 2016 Share Posted December 17, 2016 The night moved like a sidewinderthrough deserts of thought as thoseleaving the earth rewound throughhistories. Night left with his mouthfull of clouds and frozen thunder,lightning. One snap of thunder forthose departing, one lick of lightningfor those being born, clouds releasedrain, evening exhaled, winds of heavenwiped the sidewinder's tracks to etch names in the sand. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badger11 Posted December 22, 2016 Share Posted December 22, 2016 Vivid, apocalyptic picture. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 "Night left with his mouth full of clouds..." Awesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David W. Parsley Posted January 8, 2017 Share Posted January 8, 2017 Hi Barry, I too like the "mouth full of clouds and frozen thunder" image. I find the whole thing a cosmic vision of reality, moving like an alternate mythology. Good balance to the lines, nuanced cadence. Nice Work! - Dave Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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