eclipse Posted February 2, 2017 Share Posted February 2, 2017 Tears are launched like lifeboats rescuing thoughts of Dunnottar Castle, the sea has many windows it cannot climb through, there are many landscapes I can no longer preview. The strange dream I once had is seeking me-in which I was stranded in an ark on top of a promontory overlooking the castle, with the waters below drained and all that remained those drowned painting the sea as I sketched two promontory's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted February 10, 2017 Share Posted February 10, 2017 Hi Barry, This was hard for me to follow. I am assuming it is a dream sequence which often don't make sense but I wanted this to go somewhere and it didn't quite get there for me. I love L3 "the sea has many windows it cannot climb through" . I wanted to climb through those windows to see the ruins. I wanted to explore and visit the history but it didn't happen here. I still wish I was writing like this, artistically using words to set a tone, paint a picture. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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