eclipse Posted April 20, 2017 Posted April 20, 2017 Life below the water is drawn towards the suns reflection refusing to drown, waves are like the disparate pages of the city's history unable to create a seam, winds carry the skeleton of a dream towards a tree that grows eyes instead of leaves inside the mind of Lillian Biloca, enough eyes to see through the holes in the nets of fisherman, gathered to form a singular vision; working class forever drowning, bourgeoisie forever climbing. Lillian can hear the waters in a photograph sing for three sunken trawlers, their voices trapped, she ripped up the paradigm and raised them from the sea bed into a photograph. Lillian sailed with the moon and held it's anchor, the night made her captain, she then sailed the sun through Hessle road taking the residents into history to record the ascent on Parliament. Quote
Tinker Posted April 20, 2017 Posted April 20, 2017 Barry, I think this is my favorite of your work. I just kept getting sucked in further and further. I'm unfamiliar with the subject but I certainly am interested in finding more about Lillian whom I assume to be a real person. If not, the poem is a compelling work of fiction because your words came alive on the page. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
tonyv Posted April 21, 2017 Posted April 21, 2017 A hometown hero, Barry? I had to google her, but it seems there has been an artistic tribute, a mural dedicated to her: Hull mural honours trawler safety fighter Lillian Bilocca Your poem is a lovely literary tribute to her. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
dcmarti1 Posted April 29, 2017 Posted April 29, 2017 a tree that grows eyes instead of leaves Riveting. Quote
Benjamin Posted May 4, 2017 Posted May 4, 2017 A fitting tribute to a remarkable local woman "Big Lil" who campaigned for safety measures following the loss of three Hull trawlers in 1968 - St Romanus, Kingston Peridot and Ross Cleveland - all sunk in quick succession. Only one man survived.. I recall the tragedies well-- for I lived only 30 miles away at the time and my wife's father was also a trawler man sailing out of Hull. The city was badly affected. Quote
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