dr_con Posted July 21, 2017 Posted July 21, 2017 Yard Work This is what the end feels like the lawnmower putters on unseasonably long grass the Change evident in too warm winters too wet summers I know his old bone hides there before I reach the corner where lawn has gone feral he passed a few short weeks ago the Canine soul whose center is MU No/Negation And I think of my father making me earn early 12-13 who now knows a work ethic reaps what it sows empty empty Relaxed compared to his parents invested in equal parts capital patriotism And it worked I cut other follies foolish water wasters expanses based on mis- appropriation The Dream to be Wealth Good Education Elite and unadorned with the suffering of poverty’s deep deep silences hidden beneath the shag carpet behind imitation oak repurposed Trees stripped of their Godhood replaced by simulations of the good the true the beautiful if there was a lower substrate than lower case I’d use it too Even here the Buddha rests Alas Alas calling Fake Fake Fake simulations of the Past replicating the errors with the same gusto our forebears reached for belts or branches we correct the animals by going past abstraction Alone the Dog and I talked for hours. Quote thegateless.org
Tinker Posted July 21, 2017 Posted July 21, 2017 HI DC, Well as usual you give me something to think about. That is one of the things I like about your work. I love the last 2 lines, so true but I don't get quite as deep as you, your dog must be super smart. Mine is just a little sweetheart with an independent streak. She will only listen so long.. " Trees stripped of the their Godhood" Wow all kinds of images came to mine. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
badger11 Posted July 23, 2017 Posted July 23, 2017 Great title, fab ending, and much to chew on. best badge Quote
tonyv Posted July 23, 2017 Posted July 23, 2017 Juris, The "yard work," the look back at childhood to where it all began, the pet, and the loss of the beloved pet -- there's a pleasing cohesion in this poem. I enjoyed it very much. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
dr_con Posted July 23, 2017 Author Posted July 23, 2017 Thank You All.... Writing very little these days, my life consumed by Doc Concrescence, which is poetry, of a sort;-) But its good I can still produce something worthwhile for other poets. Juris Quote thegateless.org
dcmarti1 Posted July 28, 2017 Posted July 28, 2017 On 7/23/2017 at 1:02 PM, dr_con said: Thank You All.... Writing very little these days, my life consumed by Doc Concrescence, which is poetry, of a sort;-) But its good I can still produce something worthwhile for other poets. Juris Loved "where the lawn has gone feral". Quote
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