Tinker Posted August 18, 2017 Posted August 18, 2017 Triveni #2 A car careens into crowd, crushing bodies, creating chaos in the streets of Barcelona. New age running of the bulls. ~~Judi Van Gorder #3 Harbingers of hate rally in Charlottesville, rally protesters proffer presence in dissent. Law and order holds sway in the middle. ~~Judi Van Gorder Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
Terry L shuff Posted August 18, 2017 Posted August 18, 2017 A house divided Cannot stand, I wonder if they remember who said that ? Quote
dcmarti1 Posted August 22, 2017 Posted August 22, 2017 I think alliteration gives this a more serious tone than rhyme could have. Sobering. Quote
Tinker Posted August 22, 2017 Author Posted August 22, 2017 Terry, Yep it is so sad. Thank Marti, for affirming what I had hoped to accomplish. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
tonyv Posted September 4, 2017 Posted September 4, 2017 The title with two Triveni poems combined like stanzas delivers a two-for-one sense of satisfaction. This application works well with these close, current events. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic
Tinker Posted September 4, 2017 Author Posted September 4, 2017 Thanks Tony. ~~ Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com
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