Tinker Posted August 18, 2017 Share Posted August 18, 2017 Triveni #2 A car careens into crowd, crushing bodies, creating chaos in the streets of Barcelona. New age running of the bulls. ~~Judi Van Gorder #3 Harbingers of hate rally in Charlottesville, rally protesters proffer presence in dissent. Law and order holds sway in the middle. ~~Judi Van Gorder Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terry L shuff Posted August 18, 2017 Share Posted August 18, 2017 A house divided Cannot stand, I wonder if they remember who said that ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcmarti1 Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 I think alliteration gives this a more serious tone than rhyme could have. Sobering. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted August 22, 2017 Author Share Posted August 22, 2017 Terry, Yep it is so sad. Thank Marti, for affirming what I had hoped to accomplish. ~~Tink Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonyv Posted September 4, 2017 Share Posted September 4, 2017 The title with two Triveni poems combined like stanzas delivers a two-for-one sense of satisfaction. This application works well with these close, current events. Tony Quote Here is a link to an index of my works on this site: tonyv's Member Archive topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinker Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 Thanks Tony. ~~ Judi Quote ~~ © ~~ Poems by Judi Van Gorder ~~ For permission to use this work you can write to Tinker1111@icloud.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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